Would terrible things such as racism and race riots still exist if everyone was the same color? No. These kinds of things do nothing except pollute our nation and bring unhappiness to the the citizens of the universe and would simply be abolished if everyone was the same color. Being from a dilapidated neighborhood where racial tensions are extremely high and race riots happen on a weekly basis, I would love for everyone to be the same color. Also, the idea of everyone being the same color would eliminate horrible racial groups such as the Ku Klux Klan and save many innocent lives. For generations back that lead to my grandfather's childhood, the same racial riot between whites and blacks has been going on and seems never ending but would have never even originated if everyone was the same complexion.
Now, some may argue that life would be unexciting and dull, but everyone would still have their own personalities, physical features besides skin color, and possess the freedom to make choices that will separate them from any other human being. I know and see people who are terribly scarred for life and disabled from a meaningless riot. Life, in my personal opinion, would be less violent and much safer. I hope you understand why he world would be a much better place if everyone was the same color and the benefits it would bring the people of the universe
Martin, I really enjoyed reading your blog. Your choice of words flowed easily. I agree with the fact that if there were such racial discrimination so many innocent lives would be saved. I liked how you incorporated your gradnfather's childhood, it made the blog personal. Overall, I really enjoyed your blog and you did a really great job!:) -Macy O. SGGS
ReplyDeleteI want to start by thanking you for posting a generous comment on my post; I am happy that you enjoyed reading it and though the flow of my words was nice. i am looking forward to commenting on your school's post. Thank you!
DeleteI see what you're syaing and I agree. Your paragraph was very good and well thought out. Overall it was good and I liked reading it.
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Martin, you did a great job writing your blog. It kept my attention and you made very good point that I've never realized before. I agree with your point of our nation being polluted by racial discrimination. I liked how you showed your opinion and others opinions. You did a very good job, and I enjoyed reading your blog! ~Emily W. SGGS
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for commenting on my post! I am glad that I kept your attention and you thought I did a great job. What was the point i made that you have never realized before? I am looking forward to commenting on your school's blogs.
DeleteI see your view on this subject of racial discrimination. I do agree that the world would be somewhat better, but I must inquire that the world could only change so much because people essentially made-up the fact that blacks were inferior. In turn pele would just find other ways to discriminate. Although racial discrimination would be abolished the world can only change so much. On another note however, I did enjoy this post. I especially liked the fact that you included facts, which shows that you have done your research, and you included a story related to your family. This adds an element of fact and an element of emotional persuasion. You really took your time to create a spectacular blog post. ~ Steven S. SGGS
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you noticed I took my time on posting this blog and that you thought I did a good job. You have a point but elimination of skin color would be one less way to discriminate. I am looking forward to hearing your point of view in your blog.
DeleteAmazing job. Hi, I am from Vermont. I have never thought of it that way. Great details and I am sorry about you neighborhood.
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I am glad that you thought I did an amazing job! I look forward to commenting on your school's blogs.
DeleteI really like your post! I agree that if we were all the same then racial discrimination would be reduced or gone.But even if racial problems were gone then do you think that other problems would be gone to?
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you liked my blog. With out a doubt their would still be problems but their would be one less problem that makes a big difference.
DeleteThis is a really well written blog post! It looks like you spent a long time thinking about this.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you think my blog was well written and that you know I spent a lot of time on it. I look forward to commenting on your school's blogs.
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